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Sam Smith
12, rue de la Fontaine
13300 Salon de Provence
s.smith@gmail.com
07.36.96.81.24
March 14, 2024
Hiring Manager
AixImmo
49, Cours Mirabeau
13100 Aix-en-Provence
Recruitment-AixImmo@gmail.com
Dear Hiring Manager,
I am writing to express my interest in the position of real estate agent at AixImmo as advertised on LinkedIn. With a
strong background in real estate transactions and a good understanding of French property laws, I am excited about the
opportunity to contribute to your team, particularly in serving your English-speaking clientele.
In my previous role at Houses R Us, I successfully facilitated numerous property transactions for international clients
which honed my ability to manage cross-cultural communication effectively. Fluent in French, Spanish and English, I can
seamlessly navigate through negotiations and legal documentation, ensuring a smooth process for all parties involved.
One of my strengths is my meticulous attention to detail, crucial in real estate contracts and legal compliance. However, I
am continually working on improving my time management skills to enhance my efficiency even further.
Joining AixImmo represents a significant opportunity for me to leverage my skills in a dynamic environment and to further
develop my expertise in an internationally-oriented market.
Thank your considering my application. I look forward to the possibility of discussing how I can contribute to your team.
Sincerely,
Sam Smith
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A Good Work-life Balance
In my opinion, achieving a good work-life balance is essential for both personal fulfilment and professional
success. It is one where an individual can effectively manage their responsibilities at work while still having
enough time and energy to enjoy personal activities and relationships.
A key component of a good work-life balance is flexibility. This could mean flexible working hours, the ability to
work remotely, or simply an understanding from employers that personal time is crucial for employee wellbeing.
Such flexibility allows individuals to manage life's unpredictability without compromising on their professional
responsibilities.
Moreover, setting clear boundaries is also vital. This means knowing when to switch off from work, avoiding the
trap of being of constantly available through emails or calls after work hours which helps to maintaining good
mental health and productivity over time.
Lastly, a good work-life balance should include time for oneself, hobbies and relationships. Regular physical
activity, engaging in leisure activities that rejuvenate the mind and spirit and spending quality time with loved
ones call all contribute to overall happiness and job satisfaction.
In conclusion, a good equilibrium means being more efficient and enthusiastic at work but also healthier and
happier in our personal lives.
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